I personally think each one of the donors I chose did a great job explaining their case and why they feel the need to request a donation. One thing that I think they could have done better is add a little more information on behalf of the cause. I feel that when you are asking for such great sums of money the people donating should know every little bit about it. My favorite donation request was the one asking for comfort and choice. I think it is so important to allow your children to release energy while learning. I remember feeling so cooped up in elementary school, which undoubtedly lead me to being bored and hating to learning. I wish my teacher would have allowed us a few minutes a day to exert that energy, or even better give us a seat that allows that exertion all day long.
5 pieces of advise:
-make it not so wordy, get straight to the point
-make sure and include every piece of information you can
-make sure the readers understand how and why it will be used clearly
- add more background information regarding your class
-let the reader know the environment of the school and schedule of students
5 pieces of advise:
-make it not so wordy, get straight to the point
-make sure and include every piece of information you can
-make sure the readers understand how and why it will be used clearly
- add more background information regarding your class
-let the reader know the environment of the school and schedule of students