For the first grant, seeking a documentation
camera, Mrs. Coronado does a great job of introducing her students and the demographics
of the school district in which she is teaching. I like how she explained what
the product would be used for and how it would benefit the class. I think that
her page would have been better if she explained what the product was. She could
even upload a picture in the post. Overall, I liked her post and support visual
learning for children. I really enjoyed how the picture she posted was her
students saying thank you.
The second donors choose that I selected was Mrs. Lennon’s request for binoculars. I love that she wants to take learning outside and educate her New York students about birds and nature. I loved how she presented her students as young adults who are eager to learn. The way she wrote about her vision made me wan to donate myself. I wish she would have posted a picture of what the binoculars looked like and how many she was wanting. The third grant that I chose was a school in Kentucky needing volleyballs and knee-pads. I’ve played volleyball my entire life so this grant caught my attention. I liked how he started talking about their need and the areas low poverty level. Although it’s good to set up demographics, I think he could have talked a little bit less about this and more about what he needed. I love how he says that he is offering the program free for the girls.
Five tips I would give:
1. Upload pictures of what you are wanting.
2. Specify how many you are wanting.
3. Say how much the donors are appreciated.
4. Have a catchy title to draw people in.
5. Show that you have a passion for teaching and desire to see students succeed.
The second donors choose that I selected was Mrs. Lennon’s request for binoculars. I love that she wants to take learning outside and educate her New York students about birds and nature. I loved how she presented her students as young adults who are eager to learn. The way she wrote about her vision made me wan to donate myself. I wish she would have posted a picture of what the binoculars looked like and how many she was wanting. The third grant that I chose was a school in Kentucky needing volleyballs and knee-pads. I’ve played volleyball my entire life so this grant caught my attention. I liked how he started talking about their need and the areas low poverty level. Although it’s good to set up demographics, I think he could have talked a little bit less about this and more about what he needed. I love how he says that he is offering the program free for the girls.
Five tips I would give:
1. Upload pictures of what you are wanting.
2. Specify how many you are wanting.
3. Say how much the donors are appreciated.
4. Have a catchy title to draw people in.
5. Show that you have a passion for teaching and desire to see students succeed.