Add real pictures of the classroom because it helps you connect more. Use catchy or fun titles to draw more attention. The words used in class description are probably true but over used, use better vocabulary. Post about the personalities of the students not just their poor district. Talk about how teaching is your passion and why. Get matching donations which would help raise more money to fund your project. Put some examples of how your requests have proven to work well in other classrooms or schools, that would help donors choose them. Add statistics on how their idea has helped other students or evidence to convince the donor that yes this project, these supplies, etc. will work and how you know they will work.
